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How to Stop Losing Marks in English Writing

Most students lose English writing marks on structure and format, not vocabulary. Exam English is a narrower skill than being good at English, and trainable.

Niraj Kumar Jha

Niraj Kumar Jha

Founder, Gurukul

How to Stop Losing Marks in English Writing

Key takeaways

  • The paper rewards format compliance, answering the question asked, structure, and correctness - roughly in that order. Most students revise in exactly the reverse order.
  • Learning the format checklists cold is one afternoon of work for marks you are currently throwing away. A formal letter has about eight required parts and each is a tick on a scheme.
  • Writing improves from reading more than from writing exercises - you cannot produce sentence patterns you have never encountered. Twenty minutes a day at a comfortable level beats two hours on Sunday.
  • An essay nobody corrected has taught you almost nothing. Write one piece and improve it three times with real feedback rather than writing three pieces once.
  • In comprehension, answer from the passage. Find the sentence that supports your answer before you write it, and match the answer length to the marks available.

Most students in Nepal have studied English for ten years and still lose marks in the writing section for reasons nobody has told them about.

Not vocabulary. Not grammar rules they cannot recite. The marks go on structure, on the required parts of a format, on answers that discuss the topic instead of answering the question, and on sentences that are grammatically fine and say nothing.

The good news is that exam writing is a much narrower skill than "being good at English", and it is trainable in a few weeks.


What the Exam Actually Rewards

The English paper is not testing whether you write beautifully. It is testing four specific things, and knowing which one a question is asking for is half the marks.

Format compliance. A formal letter has required parts - address, date, salutation, subject line, body, closing. Each carries marks. Getting the content right and the format wrong loses marks that were free.

Answering the question asked. "Describe", "explain", "compare" and "give your opinion on" are four different tasks. Students routinely produce a good answer to a slightly different question.

Structure. A paragraph that states a point, supports it and moves on scores better than the same content arranged as one long block. Markers are looking for identifiable pieces.

Correctness. Grammar and spelling, but weighted less heavily than students fear. A well-structured answer with three small errors generally beats a flawless one that missed the format.

That ordering matters, because most students revise in exactly the reverse order - grammar drills first, structure never.


The Cheapest Marks: Learn the Formats Cold

This is the single highest-return thing in this post and it takes one afternoon.

For each format the paper can ask for - formal letter, informal letter, application, notice, report, essay, summary, dialogue - write down the required parts as a checklist. Then memorise the checklists.

A formal letter, for instance, needs the sender's address, the date, the recipient's address, a salutation, a subject line, a body in clear paragraphs, a closing phrase and a signature. Eight things. Each is a tick on a marking scheme. A student who knows all eight cannot lose those marks; a student who improvises will lose two or three every time.

Word limits are part of the format. A summary with a stated limit loses marks for exceeding it, however good it is. Practise writing to the count rather than discovering it in the hall.

Get the marking scheme if you can. Your teacher may have one. Reading a scheme for one letter question tells you more about how to earn marks than a term of general advice, because you see exactly what the marker is ticking.

Write the eight-part formal letter checklist on one card and the essay structure on another. Two cards, memorised, is worth more than any amount of vocabulary revision.


Read More Than You Write

Writing improves from reading far more than from writing exercises, and this is the part students skip because it does not feel like studying.

The mechanism is straightforward. You cannot produce sentence patterns you have never encountered. Reading supplies the patterns, the vocabulary in context, and the sense of what sounds right - which is why students who read English for pleasure write better than students who have done twice as many grammar exercises.

This is the case for extensive reading: large amounts of material at a level you can follow comfortably, for meaning rather than for study. The research on second-language acquisition consistently points at comprehensible input - material slightly above your current level but still followable - as the main driver of fluency.

Three practical points:

Comfortable, not difficult. If you are stopping every second sentence for a dictionary, the text is too hard and you are studying rather than reading. Pick something you can follow with occasional gaps.

Anything counts. Novels, newspapers, Wikipedia, football writing, science articles. Project Gutenberg has tens of thousands of free books including much of the literature that appears in curricula, and Open Library is useful for finding out what a book contains before buying it.

Twenty minutes a day beats two hours on Sunday. Vocabulary development accumulates from repeated encounters over time, not from one sitting.


Write, Then Get It Marked

An essay you wrote and never had corrected has taught you almost nothing, because you have no idea which of your habits are costing marks.

This is the actual bottleneck for most students. Producing more unmarked writing does not improve you; it rehearses your existing mistakes with more confidence.

Sources of marking, in order of value. Your teacher, for the real thing. A classmate who is stronger than you, for structure. An AI tutor, for a first read - specifically by asking "what would a marker take marks off for in this?" rather than "improve this".

The rewrite is where the learning is. Getting feedback and moving on to a new piece wastes most of it. Take the marked draft and rewrite that, yourself. You learn far more from improving one piece three times than from producing three pieces once.

Never ask an AI to rewrite it for you. It produces a better paragraph and zero improvement in you. You will submit prose you cannot reproduce, and in the exam you write alone.

Keep a list of your recurring corrections. By the third or fourth marked piece a pattern appears - usually three or four habits, not twenty. That short list is your actual revision plan, and it is more useful than any grammar book because it describes you.


The Grammar That Actually Appears

Grammar is worth less than students fear and more than they practise, and the paper is predictable about which parts it tests. Every year, in some form:

  • Tenses, especially present perfect against past simple
  • Passive voice transformation
  • Reported speech, direct to indirect
  • Conditional sentences
  • Question tags
  • Gerunds and infinitives
  • Subject-verb agreement
  • Articles and prepositions

Do exercises, not explanations. A rule you can state but cannot apply is worth nothing in a transformation question. Ten transformation questions beat a page about passive voice.

Work from your own errors. If your marked work never shows an article mistake, do not spend an evening on articles. Spend it on whatever your list says.

Two habits fix a surprising share of errors. Read your sentence back after writing it, and prefer the shorter version when you have a choice. A great deal of student error comes from sentences that grew too long to control.


Comprehension: Answer From the Passage

Reading comprehension loses marks every year for one avoidable reason: students answer from general knowledge rather than from the text.

Find the sentence that supports your answer before you write it. If you cannot point to it, you are guessing.

Match the answer's length to the marks. A one-mark question wants a phrase. A four-mark question wants four identifiable points. Writing a paragraph for one mark wastes time you needed elsewhere; writing a phrase for four marks leaves three on the table.

Use the passage's own vocabulary where it is precise, but do not copy whole sentences when the question asks you to explain in your own words - that instruction is itself worth marks.

Read the questions before the passage. You then read with a purpose and notice the relevant parts rather than reading twice.

This is a distinct skill from general reading comprehension and it is trainable almost entirely through past papers.


Speaking Helps the Writing

Slightly counterintuitive and worth doing.

Fluency built by speaking transfers to writing, because both draw on the same store of patterns. A student who has spoken English regularly composes sentences faster and with fewer stalls, which matters in a timed paper.

Speak it badly on purpose. Waiting until you can speak correctly means never speaking. The errors are the practice.

Find one person. A classmate, a sibling, a friend - twenty minutes of ordinary conversation a few times a week does more than any app.

Read aloud. If there is nobody to speak with, read a page of English out loud daily. It builds the rhythm of the language and it is the reason read-aloud practice shows up in language teaching.


A Four-Week Improvement Plan

Concrete, because "read and write more" is not a plan.

Week 1: formats. One afternoon writing out and memorising the checklist for every format the paper can ask. Then one past-paper writing question, checked against your own checklist.

Week 2: one piece, three drafts. Write one essay or letter. Get it marked. Rewrite it. Get it marked again. Rewrite again. This single exercise teaches more than four separate pieces.

Week 3: grammar from your own error list. By now you have one. Exercises only on what it contains. Plus daily reading, twenty minutes.

Week 4: timed past papers. Full writing sections under the clock, marked strictly. Track two things: marks lost to format, and marks lost to running out of time. Both are fixed by practice rather than by knowledge.

Continue the twenty minutes of daily reading throughout, and past that. It is the only item on this list that keeps paying after the exam.


Common Mistakes

Memorising essays. A memorised essay does not fit the question asked, and markers recognise them. You will write something fluent and irrelevant.

Using long words to seem advanced. A misused impressive word costs more than a correctly used simple one. Markers reward clarity.

Ignoring the format because the content is good. The format marks are the easiest on the paper and they are thrown away every year.

Writing one long paragraph. Markers look for identifiable points. A wall of text hides them, and marks that cannot be found are not awarded.

Practising without feedback. The single biggest waste of effort in the whole subject.

Leaving the writing section until last. It carries substantial marks and needs the most time. Students who leave it until the final twenty minutes lose more there than anywhere else on the paper.


The Short Version

Exam English is narrower than being good at English. Learn the format checklists cold - that is an afternoon for marks you currently throw away. Read twenty minutes a day at a comfortable level, because you cannot produce patterns you have never met.

Then write one piece and improve it three times with real feedback, rather than writing three pieces nobody corrects. Keep the list of corrections you keep receiving; that list is your revision plan.

And in comprehension, answer from the passage. Every year, marks go to students who wrote what they knew instead of what the text said.

Frequently asked questions

Learn the format checklists for every question type the paper can ask - that is one afternoon and it recovers marks you are currently losing for free. Then get one piece of writing marked and rewrite it, rather than producing more unmarked writing.

Niraj Kumar Jha

Niraj Kumar Jha

Founder, Gurukul

Building Gurukul - school management and learning tools for Nepal. Full-stack engineer working across database architecture, AI integration and frontend delivery, writing these guides from what students and schools actually deal with day to day.

Updated June 21, 2026

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